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Friday 20 December 2019

Week one, A.2, Up in the air, N.1

Kia ora Fellow bloggers,

Week 2 Is almost here,

Can't wait!

This is my second piece of work I have done.


2 comments:

  1. Hello Elise. My name is Mahuta and I go to Kawakaw primary school. I am a year 7 student in the class Nga Rau Rangatira. I really liked reading your post/Venn diagram about Margaret Adams and Katherine Cheung. It was cool to read the differences between. Do you know any similarities about them? Maybe you should do that next time.check out my blog some day. https://kpsmahutah.blogspot.com/
    Blog you later:)

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  2. Kia ora Elise,

    My name is Tayla and I am the Cluster Manager for the Summer Learning Journey in Kaikohekohe. How are you doing today? It's great to see you participating in the programme!

    I really like how colourful you've made your post, it is very eye-catching! Unfortunately it seems that you've read the activity incorrectly. The activity talked about the two aviators, Jean Batten and Amelia Earhart. It then asked you to compare and contrast these two people, which meant you needed to talk about some similarities and some differences between Jean and Amelia.

    I also notice that the information you've included in your post is from a website. In order to receive points for this activity, could you please have another look at the activity and in your own words, compare the two aviators I have mentioned.

    Thanks Elise, I'm looking forward to reading your work :)

    Ngā mihi,
    Tayla

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