Animal Town.

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and
then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is that it is long.

I need to improve on not to uos to much spich.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

“Yay” I yelled “more people to scare! Oh sorry I haven't introduced myself my name is Spirit
because I am a gorgeous black and white striped Zebra, that is way my name is Spirit.
I present the spirits.”

“What about you? You present the people right?”

“Spirit! Spirit!”

“Oh that is my mother her name is Nearly the queen of all the Zebras in the world.”

“Oh no! Hide Darla, hi mother.” I said. “Oh my darling has anything happened to you?” said Mum.
“No mother but look what I found.” i whispered.

“Ahh! What is this thing?” Mum asked me.

“It is Darla, she came to see the animal town and she is my fun friend. Hang on a minute she is
my only friend, my only excited friend and you are not abandoning her or your abandoning me.
So do not even think about anything bad or else.” I shouted.  

“Or else what? What do you want me to do with her Spirit? Feed her to the hungry jaguars?”
my mad mother said.

“No mother do not even think about that,” I shouted.

“Ok I will not but first can I call Brooke, your mean sister and your nice sister Piata to come out?”
“Ok mother.”

“Piata and Brooke can you come out please?”

“Sure mother the queen.” They replied.

“What do you want me to do mother?” said Brooke.

“Oh my Brooky,  want you to kill your little sisters friend so she can be lonely forever.”

“No mother you can not hurt Darla my only friend.” I said in a dreadful voice, that I have never used.

Before I could finish my dad started talking to stop my mother from hearing my dreadful voice.
My father was trying to make my mother keep an eye on him while Darla and I were able to make
a run for it. We got blocked by Piata but instead of her killing Darla she let us go, she even made a
cover for us so our mother could not notice we were running away.